A L O H A !
Growing up,
I lived beneath
the Great Eastern Flyway
of the Canada Geese.
Feeling trapped in my childhood,
longing to escape
to far away places.
I painted that big world
out there
in all the bright yearnings
of my heart's dreams. . . .
Alone, outside,
at a moment of peace,
imagined, hinted, then
YES, heard!
The celestial voices
of the fleet above.
Together,
traversing continents,
hinting at eternal cycles
and circles
that might redeem me
if I could just know them,
find my flock,
embark on my own
journey.
A few years later,
away at college
in Northern New Hampshire
I climbed my first 'mountain'
Bald Peak.
At the top,
crouching at the sheer
I M M E N S I T Y
of space and height,
I imagined that I heard
a familiar voice.
Then it was faint
but distinct!
A V of Canada Geese
was approaching!
My first mountain -
with old friends.
At last I was
in their realm
thousands of feet
high.
They flew as accustomed
at such remote
height,
but here the peaks
rise up to meet
the sky.
My luck, or blessing
was strong that day;
The V of singing birds
grew closer.
At once I understood
that they were heading
right in my direction!
Indeed, I waited
breathless in the sky
as they drew nearer.
Individual voices
could be divined
for the first time
by me.
"This is a special moment.
This is a wonderful gift.
This is the mystery
of Life's wonder
and reward."
The fleet drew close.
Now I saw
not a single
V,
but a tribe
of tired, skillful
Voyagers.
Each voice
in it's turn proclaiming
"I'm still here - keep going!"
The tiny perfect formation
I had watched out of sight
my entire life,
was now seen
in it's gypsy truth
up close.
In my mind's eye
today,
I still can see their
eyes,
determination,
skillful shifting on the winds,
an ancient admirable
wonderful keeping-on
over eons. . . . .
A sight seen only
through fortuitous
circumstance.
On the wing, on the wind,
on the trial
to what I would
become;
That day's portion
took me up a mountain
to see a divine thing,
a talisman of my life
that I shall quite probably
see
one last time
at death's door.
It was a smallish mountain
among giants;
But it was big enough
for me that day-
Thank For Climbing
together with us
today!
Plant your comment,
"I was here"
Hooray!
Fondly, cloudia
what a cool story...smiles...first mountain i made it up (without my parents as we did do some growing up) was in high school....we used to go camping on friday nights, me and friends...we would just sleep in a sleeping bag on the side of the trail...love those geese too...smiles.
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Gosh I bet this puts you in a very small group of people who have had this experience Cloudia, if I wasn't so scared of heights I would have loved that too :)
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ReplyDeleteWonderful photos, I like those beautiful colors, wonderful! Excellent photos!
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ReplyDeleteI remember as a kid hearing the honking of the geese flying over. It transported me as well, although I think I took it mostly for granted in those long ago days. Not anymore.
ReplyDeletereally beautiful, cloudia.
ReplyDeletehard to hear geese over the cars ...
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful write. A personal, mystical experience. Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDelete(Haven't been around much. The flu and stress of moving have consumed my time.)
What a lovely story Cloudia - geese fly over here on their migratory trail too and we look for them every year. But your experience sounds unique.
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Great story. When I saw the post's title, I was wondering if the ending would include the words "silly goose," but perhaps that phrase is a misnomer.
ReplyDelete'Silly goose'. Haha:-) thanks, dears
ReplyDeleteWondrous and so cool, I was conversely feeling somewhat trapped living in tiny HI as a child and couldn't wait to go off to into the big wild world of the East Coast and beyond! (Even CA was too close for comfort:) Just shows there are adventures and mountains to be climbed no matter where we are!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully told, Cloudia. I am thrilled every time I see a V formation.. which is just about daily. They never fail to entertain. And neither do you.
ReplyDeleteThanks to deforestation here in Virginia the geese are here year round. often though you will see them in their V's winging away somewhere.
ReplyDeleteMiło by było na jakiś czas stać sie ptakiem i zobaczyć piękny świat z góry. Pozdrawiam.
ReplyDeleteIt would be nice for a while to become a bird and see the beautiful world of mountains. Yours.
Wonderful set of images.
ReplyDeleteYes, wild birds not only sing about freedom, but they fly.
ReplyDeletePlease have you all a good weekend ahead.
the images work so well with your words
ReplyDeleteWonderful. Happy Easter.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful photos.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice weekend.
Your beautiful and liberating story has put tears in my eyes. Have a wonderful, wonderful weekend.
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy climbing a mountain with you Cloudia. Loved reading about this one. Thank you my friend.
ReplyDeleteYour comments here thrill & humble me! Thanks so much, dear friends
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Buona Pasqua! Happy Easter!!!
How exciting! What a gift and message you were given!
ReplyDeleteAs you surely know, wild goose = the Holy Spirit.
Congrats on your POTW! yes, the call of the geese touches my heart each year and I have seen them in many places high above on their energetic and happy journey.
ReplyDeletecongrats on your POTW!
ReplyDeleteHere via Hilary and congratulations on your POTW! This was an amazing journey and I enjoyed how you presented it! :)
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